tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-500772314734749006.post1770862581129862673..comments2023-05-19T00:58:14.080-07:00Comments on somaari: My Village,sheshagirijodidarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05730824381467581709noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-500772314734749006.post-13468349717113254892009-09-05T20:13:58.484-07:002009-09-05T20:13:58.484-07:00Undoubtedly both the poems are very well described...Undoubtedly both the poems are very well described but I felt it was too lengthy. The author could have cut it short by some lines. <br />I feel the reader may lose interest after a few lines as this goes well more as a prose than poetry.<br />The lack of rhyming words or should I say less rhyming or not properly placed rhyming may also be linked to the first point.<br />Also it feels like the poet...? Wanted to convey everything at one go hence the poem has become too long.<br />These re the only few points i cud find, apart form this it looks fine.<br /><br /><br />It’s just my opinion; I might be wrong in looking at it. If I have got the undertone and content and format wrong the writer has right to ignore my comment...<br /><br />Sahana….Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-500772314734749006.post-65216073482546868892009-08-15T07:37:50.698-07:002009-08-15T07:37:50.698-07:00has tried his level best to give a poetic frame to...has tried his level best to give a poetic frame to his experience..but has neither failed nor succeeded in his effort..can read for a chage...<br /><br /><br />Vibhav...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com